Couple issues I take with this.
CNC aluminum
What alloy of aluminum? And why is this so far down in the post?
Layout:
Unclear. Most people use color to differentiate separate layout options, but yours looks like some vintage catastrophe.
Vendors:
Why do you have vendors already when this was just posted as an IC? You don't know if people want this yet, how do you have a vendor signed up to run it? And why only 3 regions?
Why is the weight entirely internal? Seems like a pretty bold design choice.
edit: forgot jane v2 ce existed lul, this does the same thing with the weight as that board. alpha centered and internal. interested to see how this soundsBy a "Hard-Case", I assume you mean a carrying case.
I understand this is your first IC, but please look around to see typical formats. At the very least spoiler your images.