Hey dude, it seems like you are pretty new to the community. As the comment above suggests, I also recommend that you join some communities and hang out for a bit to understand how things work, before going about with IC posting. Some people take them very seriously so it may not reflect well to have an IC post like yours that is, simply put, very rough and largely unfinished.
Here are some points I have for you, consider going through them and coming back with a more convincing and fleshed-out IC:
1) have physical colour matching. Not just seemingly random hex codes. Are they even actual printable colours? Why are there hexes and 3 RALs? Thats just confusing imo
2) make sure you know your manufacturer options. Can epbt do what your design requires? A comment above seems to say no, so you might wanna check again (i’m not too sure myself)
3) posting KLEs are like asking for a free beatdown. Last guy that posted it didnt meet a good end iirc, sad to say. People post a lengthy IC with realistic renders, many pay for them just to show commitment and accurate portrayal of their set, a KLE does neither, some people may take it as a half-hearted attempt
4) another comment has mentioned how mecha doesnt explain anything, and I agree. Themes are taken seriously, if you can get it across in a concise manner, good for you. Yours doesn’t explain anything.
All in all, there are many more parts you are missing in your IC, I’ve just pointed out a few of them. I hope you can see it as room for improvement and not be too discouraged. Hope to see you come back with a better IC in the future, your set is interesting, not gonna lie. You just need an understanding of how things work here my dude