I did not see a feedback section in the google form, but here are some of my thoughts because I do think the colors are good but the design needs some touch ups.
IMO the deskmat feels a bit inconsistent. Sometimes inconsistency in stroke and spacing can be elegant and artistic but this looks like it was thoroughly considered - here are some things that I feel could be changed up (an opinion):
- The differences in dash spacing, etc. the inconsistency in the spacing between the dashed lines looks like things were just scaled up / down without consideration for how spacing would be affected. It's mostly evident when you compare the dashed lines from the top right and the bottom left corners, where the top right feels a lot more dense. It's hard to get a "minimalistic" feel from this deskmat when things feel inconsistent and disorderly.
Show Image(https://i.imgur.com/ExKXesL.png)- The distance between the dashed lines on the left to the edge of the deskmat, is noticeably larger than the distance between the dashed lines on the right to the edge of the deskmat:
Show Image(https://i.imgur.com/ApNlBS1.png)- Corner rounding inconsistency - the text has soft corners, some dashed lines have soft / rounded corners. And then you have a large red underline on the text that has sharp corners, as well as the dashed lines on the bottom left / right having sharp corners
Show Image(https://i.imgur.com/5SKKHGG.png)- In the bottom right corner, you could try playing with having the dashed strokes actually curve instead of just forming straight lines into a curve - this looks really jagged and also makes the spacing from the edge of the mat to the line inconsistent. (example of what I mean: https://i.imgur.com/hWOrqPM.png, instead of: https://i.imgur.com/bNXdIi0.png)
I did not see a feedback section in the google form, but here are some of my thoughts because I do think the colors are good but the design needs some touch ups.Thank you for the feedback! I totally agree, and I should have put more thought into the small details. I will update this thread soon with new images. I really appreciate you taking the time to give feedback.
IMO the deskmat feels a bit inconsistent. Sometimes inconsistency in stroke and spacing can be elegant and artistic but this looks like it was thoroughly considered - here are some things that I feel could be changed up (an opinion):
- The differences in dash spacing, etc. the inconsistency in the spacing between the dashed lines looks like things were just scaled up / down without consideration for how spacing would be affected. It's mostly evident when you compare the dashed lines from the top right and the bottom left corners, where the top right feels a lot more dense. It's hard to get a "minimalistic" feel from this deskmat when things feel inconsistent and disorderly.
MoreShow Image(https://i.imgur.com/ExKXesL.png)- The distance between the dashed lines on the left to the edge of the deskmat, is noticeably larger than the distance between the dashed lines on the right to the edge of the deskmat:
MoreShow Image(https://i.imgur.com/ApNlBS1.png)- Corner rounding inconsistency - the text has soft corners, some dashed lines have soft / rounded corners. And then you have a large red underline on the text that has sharp corners, as well as the dashed lines on the bottom left / right having sharp corners
MoreShow Image(https://i.imgur.com/5SKKHGG.png)- In the bottom right corner, you could try playing with having the dashed strokes actually curve instead of just forming straight lines into a curve - this looks really jagged and also makes the spacing from the edge of the mat to the line inconsistent. (example of what I mean: https://i.imgur.com/hWOrqPM.png, instead of: https://i.imgur.com/bNXdIi0.png)