Soldering could use some work. What iron do you have?
Looking at it, almost certainly your problem is you're not heating both pieces. If you look at the wires, there's a glob of solder on the wire itself and hardly any on the component you're soldering to. This means that you got most of the heat on the wire and hardly any on the component. Heat needs to be on both.
D1 looks pretty good: what it should look like D9 and D11 are pretty bad.
you can probably fix it by reflowing solder, but you'd have to pry the glue up: it may give you some issues down the road so if it starts getting intermittant then you know what to do (open it up and reflow everything)
Having done similar things myself I know how hard it can be to solder like that, so I'm pretty impressed you were able to do work that close as a relative newbie. So the fact that you could do it at all is pretty impressive.
Here's my work. Dime for scale. wire is 28 ga
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Can't wait for the next update!