Colors, kitting, and copypasta aside, this IC does need a lot of work. One of the biggest things I'm seeing is that even though this is planned to be a JTK set, it doesn't utilize their greatest asset: tripleshot legends. This could easily be run as any other set otherwise.
The release of the IC has clearly been lined up with the release of the game. If you're trying to capitalize on the hype of the game, on top of adding novelties and such, it should be worth considering how you will craft the set keeping IP and Copyright infringement in mind going forward.
As a general rule of thumb, it would be better to release an IC when you have everything ready to present to get accurate feedback. Posting something as superficial as this doesn't give nearly enough information as to what the set has to offer other than Cyberpunk themed.